Saturday, November 13, 2010
The Big Step (chp 15)
I've decided to attempt to reveal myself to my protectors. I figure the best and safest way is to confront the old man first. Due to his blindness, he will not be able to look upon my hideousness which seems to be the main cause of my enemies' fear and hatred. I am very frightened to do this and I am not sure of my protectors will act. I mean, they do not seem to be mean or hateful people. I have observed them give to the hungry and provide shelter to the homeless. How then, could they turn me away who only seeks love and compassion? I feel confident, but at the same time I fear my plan will fail and I will yet again be forced to run and hide, alienating myself from the rest of the world. My future is unpredictable and the only way I will be able to find the outcome is by going for it.
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I like this post in the way that it throughly explains the monster's emotions before he confronts his "protectors", but I think that you and many others have forgotten that this part of his tail is a flashback, and the monster that is talking now barely knows how to talk. I would had of liked it if you would had of put some grammatical errors (on purpose of course) in the post to signify his inability to construct sentences and how it improves as he master the science of talking.
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