Monday, November 22, 2010
When The Curtain Closes (chp 24)
I think it's time for me to present my softer side. Everyone thinks I'm such a cold-hearted beast, but that's not so. I do have a heart. Personally, I feel it's one of the largest from what I've seen from these humans! Yes, I have killed and taken the lives of innocent people, but that's all people seem to see. They don't know how much it hurt to feel the life leave slowly be deprived from my victims. There was so pain and sadness flowing through me that it took ALL the strength I possessed to hold back the tears. These people had not done anything to harm me and I did not want to kill them. I was driven by the hatred I had in my heart for my creator. It was the only way I could make him suffer the way I had. The only way to make him feel the agony I felt when he salvaged the one and only chance I had for acceptance! The only to make him live with the anguish I had had to deal with for the entirety of my life! If HE had only accepted me for who I was when he first created me! If HE had only been more compassionate towards after getting over the initial of my appearance! If HE had only kept his promise in making me a companion that I could call my own! It's HIS fault, NOT MINE! And he deserves to pay for the all he has put me through! Don't you agree?
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I really liked this post. It showed the true feelings of the creature. What he was thinking when everything around him turned to nothing. When he was alone, mad and scared. This post has so much emotion going on. Good job.
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I love the use of emotion in this post, it really brings out the feelings of the creature.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you expressed the feelings of the creature in a new way. By that I mean he has never had a soft side to him and you showed it very well!!
ReplyDeleteI am glad to say that for once you have done a good job. But there was only one thing that you seemed to miss. You never talked about how the monster actually perished. Yes you showed that the monster had emotions, which all of us already knew, but you didn't signify the change after the death of Victor. All in all though you did a good job
ReplyDeleteGreat job Jaz! You really have stepped up this year! :] You really brought out the true feelings of the creature and helped us all better understand how he truly felt! You expressed his emotions in such an awesome way. I love it! Again, good job and keep it up! :]
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